Calm and serene,
The tranquil ambience engulfs me
In the gentle breeze,
Sway the leaves on the tree clumps
Awestruck, at the youth of spring
The quaint roses dance along
Engrossed in him, I walk along the arbor
The lily flowers ready to wither away in summer
Echo out, with mine, their heart’s thirst
Slowly and slyly, his azure eyes meet mine
Drenching my heart and quenching my thirst
Like the early morning May showers
For a moment he looks away,
With a somber face he shakes his head,
And laments, “No! I doubt if I can do it.”
The twinkling stars I had seen in his eyes
Fade away with these poignant words
My hands extend out to hold his
Wrapping his hands in mine
I gaze at him and say,
“I’m sure you can. Trust me!”
His face lights up and eyes glisten
His lips crease as he looks at me,
Curving out and flashing a smile
A moment of silence between us,
My heart skips a beat
The cerulean blue sky, gleams
In blissful thoughts,
While looking over us
Entwining my fingers in his,
We move along, listening to
The rhythm of our footsteps,
The rhythm of our heart beats
The rhythm of our love!
- Mahima Jose
17 comments:
"The rhythm of our footsteps,
The rhythm of our heart beats
The rhythm of our love!"
how beautiful.
hey little one. that was too good! so intense, especially last para
Awww! that's so poignant
wow, kuttu, it's like a beautiful painting in words! it reminded me of the romance paperbacks we used to read way back in our teens. keep writing!
daughter dearest,you rock!!!!!!!
hi mahima!!!! nice blog u have got there, gal. keep writing such lovely poems. i loved the one which came in youngtimes. u really have that talent in u!!!!!!
and can u guess who i am?
solo: oh tanku, solo!
anon: im glad u liked it
nut: thanksss:):)
geets: thank u, mom! enne kondu ithu thaangan vayya ente amme...:):)
anon n.o2: thank u so much!
well, i have no idea! is it u, chinnu?
The rhythm of our footsteps,
The rhythm of our heart beats
The rhythm of our love!
Love is in the air
:-)
:):)
hey am glad i came looking for older posts...
lowely read mahi. painted a picture of a pretty picture perfect girl and a hunk of a guy. :)
thanks chechi!
Really beautiful poem!
Did you write it when u were very happy???
Can I put it on mine, stating its urs? Its really lovely!!
I want more people to knw bout it, if its ok with u.
THeres a movie called A walk to remember too.. Did u watch it?
kudos to u!
I found another way.. NO plagarism (It wasnt exactly that, was gonna mention u).. ;)
Keep on writing!
@Aditi: Hey, of course! You can put it up in your blog under my name:) I'd more than happy if more people read it! Thank you so much, dear! I'm glad you liked the poem:)I wrote it at 2AM one morning:D And I've seen the movie. Very touching, isn't it?
yea.. very touchin..
its one of my fav.. Its story line is very similar to this novel too, A love Story, by Eric Segal..
No idea, who wrote first! :P
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