Friday, March 21, 2008

Come back Sunny days!


This is something I had written recently, when I was feelin totally down. It's an acrostic poem, by the way.
Come Back, Sunny Days!

Ailing, I stand by the desolate path of solitude
Drowning myself in the forlorn sea of seclusion
I wonder how long the wait would linger
To get a glimpse of the radiant sun
Yearnings of the soul seem intensified
As I loiter away days for it to appear again

Never had I thought that the summer would fleet away
Ah, but then "all good things must come to an end"
Ruefully I ruminate over the truth it holds
And tell myself that this is life
Yet my heart longs for those sunny days
Anticipating, I bide my time, along with
Nascent hopes of a brighter tomorrow



- Mahima Jose

7 comments:

Geets said...

Nice poem, Kuttu, but why were you feeling low????

VIDYA said...

:) :) lowely poemm

Mahi said...

Geets :
oh thats a long story, mamma:)

Vidya:
thank u vidyechi!

Mahi said...
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Anonymous said...

hi!goooood poem.loved it.keep it up.!!!

Mahi said...

danks li!

Chinnu said...

ADITYA NARAYAN !!! Very clever... Keep it up.